Once upon a time their lived a little girl and she was walking on the grass and she was going home when she was not looking she dropped the key and that key was for her bedroom. One day princess Hollie came walking on the grass and the princess tripped over the key and picked it up and took it home to show her father king Paul and the king was proud of his daughter and he said go and put it in the treasury room please and the princess said o.k dad and when Sophie the girl got back home her mum said can i have the key back please when Sophie put her hand in her pocket she said to her mum that i think i lost the key mum what you lost the key yea i think the princess piked it up what said the girls mum the princess whats wrong with the princess its just that when the princess finds some thing when its some one else she never gives
it back but why cant we by another one because they don't have them special keys but if we ask the princess nicely then may be she will give it back one problem with that what is it we don't know where she live's of cause we know because she live's in a castle but we don't know where the castle is ether that is a big problem that mean's we can't get in to our room's that is a disaster i know right we are domed this can't be happening to us let's just try o.k but if it dose not work then we will have to go and take it our selves but mum we can't do that it's stealing but it is our's fine then when they got to the castle they asked the princess if they can have there key back but the princess said no and they said but why because i fond it fer and swear but it is our key for our room and now we can't get in o.k you can have it back then i did not know it was you'rs but then my farther will go into there and then he will find out that the key is gone but we can make a fake one i don't no how to do a fake one we will help you no one never help's me you mean not even you'r made's nope what but if i was you let's just make a fake key because my farther be here any minute then let's get to it then by the time we finished we got the real key and put the fake one in come on let's get home and by the way thank you for the fake key the End
My Reflection
In this activity my task was to try and write 100 words.
I found this hard because you had to make it up in you'r head and use as many key in you'r story.
I am most proud of my work.
my next steps are to try and write 100 words.
it back but why cant we by another one because they don't have them special keys but if we ask the princess nicely then may be she will give it back one problem with that what is it we don't know where she live's of cause we know because she live's in a castle but we don't know where the castle is ether that is a big problem that mean's we can't get in to our room's that is a disaster i know right we are domed this can't be happening to us let's just try o.k but if it dose not work then we will have to go and take it our selves but mum we can't do that it's stealing but it is our's fine then when they got to the castle they asked the princess if they can have there key back but the princess said no and they said but why because i fond it fer and swear but it is our key for our room and now we can't get in o.k you can have it back then i did not know it was you'rs but then my farther will go into there and then he will find out that the key is gone but we can make a fake one i don't no how to do a fake one we will help you no one never help's me you mean not even you'r made's nope what but if i was you let's just make a fake key because my farther be here any minute then let's get to it then by the time we finished we got the real key and put the fake one in come on let's get home and by the way thank you for the fake key the End
My Reflection
In this activity my task was to try and write 100 words.
I found this hard because you had to make it up in you'r head and use as many key in you'r story.
I am most proud of my work.
my next steps are to try and write 100 words.
1 comment:
Hollie you have written a very detailed story with some interesting adjectives, great job.
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